Page Three
Liking this page a lot better than the last already. Dr. Schtein looks pretty neat in color, and now I can switch to drawing his eyes more detailed (the circles look just didn’t work in black in white in my opinion).
Liking this page a lot better than the last already. Dr. Schtein looks pretty neat in color, and now I can switch to drawing his eyes more detailed (the circles look just didn’t work in black in white in my opinion).
Nice! You’re improving fast with the colors! It really looks better than the previous pages. The shading on the characters makes it look much neater. And I absolutely love the “ghastly backgrounds”, they give a lot of atmosphere >3>
I think Delia is going to have a seizure trying to assimilate all that.
I really loved the black and white pages too, but the color looks fantastic as well! I like how Schtein’s eyes look and his pastiness in color. XD
Oh my god Osgood just bent that fork
Hoshit she did. Didn’t notice it before. That’s terrifying!
Aw man that is some awesome shading. I agree–it looks bounds better than the previous pages. The fifth panel is especially awesome, fork bending and all.
Dang, that’s one powerful death glare. I’m amazed it didn’t transfer through the phone! I’m pretty sure the Dr. wouldn’t have told her to shut up otherwise…
Awwwwwwww! He thought of her when he was being beaten to a pulp!
I love people when their beat up.
Oh wow~ This page looks fantastic! I love the beautiful shading!
At the same time though, I really enjoyed the black and white pages. There was a good deal of focus on them, and you could really see that. Not saying these aren’t as wonderful, I just like the seeing the shifting aesthetic. :D
I can’t decide if I like the colour version more than the b/w one… let’s just say they both rock for different reasons, and you’re getting better and better every page that goes. Rageful Osgood is awesome. Great work!
Osgood:1
Fork:0
I have to agree. Maybe you could, if you ever go back to the other pages, just make his eyes in colour? The red iris really helps convey the idea that his eyes are ROBOTS.
Also, SCHTEIN, I missed him so much ;_;
okay yes, it has only been three pages, what of it
Wow, he looks like crap.
Ahhh <3 the last panel is such win, it makes me adore Schtein even more! D: What a handsome, beaten up man he is. The blood really brings out his features 8D
I know its cruel, but he looks awesome when hes beaten and bloody. I love it when people are like that.. not in real life of course, just in drawings :D
The colors are a big improvement over pages 1-2. I like the anime lighting trick in panel 5 too.
Of all the very good reasons to keep reading this comic, the one at the top of my list is to see when Schein modifies his biomechanical red robot eyes to shoot lasers out of them.
Oooo, that would be awesome!
This sounds stupid but I love the telephone at the end. Unlike the rest of the comic, very straight, industrial lines and looks like metal. Awesome.