I put off reading this webcomic until I had finished all of my college apps and stuff, so I could go through it all at once. And I sincerely regret that. I read the archives twice today, realized it was saturday, and then started refreshing the page for about an hour and half because I’m creepy. ANYWAY the point is I love your work!
That’s an odd thing to picture… do you think he’d get all pissy if they tried to get him to shave his head? And I can’t help thinking he’d go apeshit if someone tried to give him a prison tattoo.
But Jesus Christ, that look of his in the seventh panel is heartbreaking!
yeah I’m definitely not happy with that panel. I should have broken the text up more, there’s too many words that are too similar stacked together if that’s what you mean. My dyslexia won’t let me read it. And also the first sentence is awkwardly written, and is probably a run-on sentence. I might rewrite that… It bothers me.
The thing about talking is, mostly people don’t notice too much if their grammar’s off. It’s not like writing. So, considering that, you shouldn’t worry about run-on sentences unless they’re being spoken by people who are very anal in that regard.
Buuuut I had no problem reading the panel so I’m not really a good authority on this, I suppose.
Aaah, I feel so bad for Schtein. He looks like he is in so much oain. I would like to ship him a box of hygiene stuff, plz. Like 10 sets of gloves and huge toothbrushes to swab the cell with.
I have an uncle that just got out of prison for robbery… You should hear some of his horror stories about the monsters he had to live with. He didn’t join any gangs, though. Hard to believe at first, but then you realize he has no tattoos. He survived by doing legal work for them. I’m thinking that would be Schtein’s only chance. Aside from busting out…
Man, JayJay looks so much like my boyfriend… just add more beard, and you know… not in prison.
Gee, I wish this updated more- you’ve really made reading webcomics exciting. More so that your setting up some really interesting things to come- what with all the mad scientist pieces I see on your DA, I can’t WAIT to see how he comes to that!
LOL A swastika on each nut?!
The seventh panel is awfully depressing, but who could blame him? He was pronounced deceased, thrown in prison and might just rot in the hell hole! I do hope Osgood pieces everything together :(
“He called right after it said he died :O NO!”
I love those little lines you used in the 7th panel. They remind me of when I obsessively draw patterns on large sheets of paper, because I am ocd.
Schtein’s immune system must be shot from being in that sterile lab for so many years…
ho-ly-cow. This is my favourite page so far. Between the awesome-as-ever art and the incredibly blunt dialogue i feel myself going squee. Also, Jacob’s last line makes me love him.
Oh God, he looks awful… I hope he escapes before they break him! :c
I put off reading this webcomic until I had finished all of my college apps and stuff, so I could go through it all at once. And I sincerely regret that. I read the archives twice today, realized it was saturday, and then started refreshing the page for about an hour and half because I’m creepy. ANYWAY the point is I love your work!
creepy is good! I like creepy (being creepy myself). Thank you very much.
Poor “Doc”, careful not to catch the plague while there. As usual, I love the expressions.
LEEEROOOY JEEEENKIIINS! XD
Oh man, I love the graffiti. Also I bet these two are gonna be best friends before too long. ;D
Is he having gloves withdrawal? And yeah, he should be the head of the Aryans, he is probably 10x whiter than the whitest of them.
no, but I am. I miss drawing them. :C
That’s an odd thing to picture… do you think he’d get all pissy if they tried to get him to shave his head? And I can’t help thinking he’d go apeshit if someone tried to give him a prison tattoo.
But Jesus Christ, that look of his in the seventh panel is heartbreaking!
Man, Jayjay’s kinda a mean guy. Only when his quarry’s curled up in defeat, though.
Wow, the effort on the backgrounds in this one is awesome :D
The only thing I have to note is that I had to re-read the dialogue in the second panel a few times before I understood what he meant. :\
yeah I’m definitely not happy with that panel. I should have broken the text up more, there’s too many words that are too similar stacked together if that’s what you mean. My dyslexia won’t let me read it. And also the first sentence is awkwardly written, and is probably a run-on sentence. I might rewrite that… It bothers me.
The thing about talking is, mostly people don’t notice too much if their grammar’s off. It’s not like writing. So, considering that, you shouldn’t worry about run-on sentences unless they’re being spoken by people who are very anal in that regard.
Buuuut I had no problem reading the panel so I’m not really a good authority on this, I suppose.
Aaah, I feel so bad for Schtein. He looks like he is in so much oain. I would like to ship him a box of hygiene stuff, plz. Like 10 sets of gloves and huge toothbrushes to swab the cell with.
I have an uncle that just got out of prison for robbery… You should hear some of his horror stories about the monsters he had to live with. He didn’t join any gangs, though. Hard to believe at first, but then you realize he has no tattoos. He survived by doing legal work for them. I’m thinking that would be Schtein’s only chance. Aside from busting out…
Man, JayJay looks so much like my boyfriend… just add more beard, and you know… not in prison.
Gee, I wish this updated more- you’ve really made reading webcomics exciting. More so that your setting up some really interesting things to come- what with all the mad scientist pieces I see on your DA, I can’t WAIT to see how he comes to that!
Oh god he’s crying. :C His bunched-up position is just perfect, poor guy. I can see this ending very poorly for him…
LOL A swastika on each nut?!
The seventh panel is awfully depressing, but who could blame him? He was pronounced deceased, thrown in prison and might just rot in the hell hole! I do hope Osgood pieces everything together :(
“He called right after it said he died :O NO!”
Okay, I really like Jacob. Or, JayJay. :) But awww, poor Schtein. The looks on his face is just heartbreaking.
The sweat beads are so realistic that it made me feel queasy, too! You never fail to impress.
You definitely make prison look like punishment! (Which is a good thing!) I echo what everyone else said: great expressions! Wow so atmospheric.
It is currently 2060ish and there is still writing from 1998. That place hasn’t been cleaned in half a century.
It just doesn’t fit into the budget. It gets cleaned, but not repainted. Not often, anyway.
Haha, Jacob. I could have been named Ashley Ashley, but fortunately my parents have common sense.
Poor, poor Schtein! The first pannel is breaking my heart…
I love the seventh panel.
I love those little lines you used in the 7th panel. They remind me of when I obsessively draw patterns on large sheets of paper, because I am ocd.
Schtein’s immune system must be shot from being in that sterile lab for so many years…
Osgood knows he’s alive! I wonder if she’ll come visit him… I miss her. lol
Oh man! Just got linked here and I am now hooked…It’s like you drew it just for meeeeee.
Ha! I love JayJay! And dang–Schtein looks so freaked. Poor guy.
At least they let him keep his eyes, the would truly be terrible without them.
Is there any chance Jacob is the same guy on page 18? >_>
No way, Jacob’s way fatter. That guy’ll show up again eventually.
ho-ly-cow. This is my favourite page so far. Between the awesome-as-ever art and the incredibly blunt dialogue i feel myself going squee. Also, Jacob’s last line makes me love him.