Page Fortyfive
Good job! Be proactive!
Hey! Got a New Tumblr dedicated entirely to the comic!
All it contains is sweet sketches, art, world and character info and nothing else. Oh also people can ask the characters questions and get in character replies. Sometimes. Depends on the question.
Anyway, yeah, you should check that out if you are so inclined.
Nice, Schtein, way to keep busy. Also, I shouldn’t d’aw as much as I do over JayJay rolling him a cigarette. Still, that guy is seriously nice to Schtein considering what he jhas to put up with.
If you’re stuck bunking with someone you may as well make the best of it!
yeah, he could have worse bunkmates.
Since it looks like they’re sharing, it might not be a ciggy…
He’s now in full on mad scientist mode, I see…
The smoke skull is a nice touch.
Aw..is that his first evil plot rant?~ :D You must be so proud <3
Hmmm… no, he’s ranted before. But this seems at least SLIGHTLY more like a plan rather than enraged murder plots.
Nooo, you’ve explained your plan! That means it’s going to fail, you fool!
Standard pitfall of Plots and Plans. If you (the audience) know the workings of the plan, it will mess up at every turn.
It’ll probably be fine.
Suuure.
I’m hoping it only means his plan will become grossly disfigured but will come through in the end
Holy…this page is gorgeous. Schtein looks seriously impressive in the first panel. I don’t know what it is, exactly, or how to describe it, but it’s just…wow. New favorite page for sure.
It’s his sweet yoga pose, maybe
Thank you!
Aww, I was hoping that he was going to secretly plant all the bombs on Phineas and bathe in the gristle in all the confusion. I guess escaping into some irradiated hell-desert is a good backup plan, though.
No no, it’s still a workable plan! Imagine all the new and (possibly) tasty critters roving around in an irradiated hell-scape! It’ll be like Fallout 3! … The hardcore version… where you die of starvation and thirst and irradiation poisoning…
I… don’t think he’s… a gristle bathin’ type.
What could possibly go wrong? (not the art because that has all gone very right)
I’m guessing that’s not just tobacco?
It must be some of the Good Shitâ„¢.
You guess correctly.
YES. BURN EVERYTHING.
Burning people! He says what we’re all thinking!
Never did I expect the antisocial Schtein to become some sort of Prison Gang boss! Phineas is the loose-cannon muscle, Krow is the “Red” of the prison (explosives instead of rock hammers), and JayJay is the general-purpose Number 2 man!
Well, Phineas isn’t really with schtein, JayJay isn’t really a “gang” person, and that only leaves two people, and that isn’t really a gang.. buuuuut those are people he is *safe* from and that will help him out, just not really a gang, or at least in my opinion.
I love this page, he is becoming a fine young villein
His face in panel 6. Nightmares for me.
Carefull with that joint Doc! I learned long ago that seeing faces in the smoke means you;ve had enough.
Creepy smoke bubbles. I never much liked Stein’s new hackjob of a haircut, but he’s rockin’ it on this page.
and I begin to wonder if Jay Jay is a mole of some kind… he’s -too- nice —as is that first panel.
Uh oh. We know the plan now.
Mmmmmman, the texture is that first panel is nice.
Wow, the colors in this page are AMAZING, and I love Schtein’s face in the 2nd to last panel.
First panel Schtein is almost like a buddhist-esque icon. What a pose!
Schtein’s *face*. Also, his lotus pose in the first panel. I had no idea Schtein was so flexible.
In any case, I love how JayJay is still just sort of going along with this. Though I really have to wonder what he did to get in here…he seems so *nice*.
I also love how much more deranged Schtein gets with every page. Seriously, this is amazing. Well on the way to true villainy.
“The Prolific Mr. Anonymous” did the research (and commented on page 44) — Jayjay’s in for armed robbery.
Still, it still makes him downright normal next to Finn.
He must have really ticked someone off. Armed robbery *does* seem weirdly normal.
I love the finger wiggly gesture in that last panel. It’s so natural. *I* do that.
OMFG!!!! I love, Love, LOVE the 6th panel! Brilliant.
How do they manage to get a joint in prison?
Aha, unless it’s not?
it’s not that hard to get weed in prison at all. In this particular prison I’d say either the prisoners are growing it themselves or or the staff is smuggling it in for extra cash.
Which is what generally happens in real life.
that’s weird.
considering that it’s, supposedly illegal.
people really are corrupt. :c
Loving the skull smoke.
New favorite page! I can’t even begin to tell you how madly in love I am with this update. The expressions, the inks, the color, the BG, the dialogue, those flippin’ gorgeous smoke clouds (the word bubble in the last panel! Innovative!) and shadows… Jesus god they blow my mind! Every page is a joy but this one is 150% marvelous. I am more excited than ever to see this story progress. Never stop, Grundy, never stop.
Alright, I’ll say this: you have improved quite a lot. Comparing the latest pages to the first ones… whoa. Everything looks so neat! I especially love the swirly death-smoke.
That smoke bubble is really pretty.
Hmm… Not quite the escape plan I was expecting… But I suppose it might be hard to get the parts or tools he’d need for the one I was thinking of in prison… Even for the shrunk version.
Or maybe he’s lying… Or at least not telling everything… Or maybe this plan will fail (since he explained it where we could hear) and he’ll then come up with what I expected… Or maybe I’m just expecting too much of him at this stage. :P
have less expectation, you’ll be happier. c:
Wonder if the showers are one of the locations? A bunch of soggy naked criminals tearing through the prison after a bomb goes off would surely be a lot of pandemonium.
That is by far the best speech bubble I have ever seen.
I imagined Stein sounding like George C. Scott in the second-to-last panel, then like Bugs Bunny in the last panel. I have voice actor whiplash.
Holy moley! That smoke speech bubble is awesome!!