Maybe its just me but Phins hands still seem big,,, at least in comparance to Docs XD maybe its just a thing! Jeez louise tho, I WANT to see whats going to happen next!
You know, I’ve seen a part of your livestream process… In that last panel, you’ve put SO MUCH detail in the truck for example but now so much of that got lost.
I mean, I LOVE these panels! Absolutely love the atmosphere. Just seems too bad you put so much time in these little things while nobody will see them.
Aw I didn’t put that much detail on the truck. Kinda scribbled it in real quick. I wasn’t going to add that much smoke in front of it, but the other gun got lost in all the detail.
Dang, that sucks. I wonder where they will be taken, or if Jay Jay is gonna make a superhero appearance and bust them out of the evil warden’s clutches? I can’t wait ’tilnext thursday!
I did see one thing in the last panel that looks off. are Phineas’ legs to thin/short and together or something? Because it doesn’t look quite right. Otherwise, the backgrounds are grat as always, especially the 3rd panel!
The page looks amazing, love what you did with the first panel and just loving the lighting and backgrounds in general! I’m also kinda diggin’ Doc with those shades on, haha.
This looks so fucking amazing. I love the top panel, by cutting the characters out of the actual panel it lends it a sense of movement I wouldn’t have expected! And also the difference in their poses even as they walk, and that gun. The slant in the final panel is also fantastic. Really makes you feel the /thud/ as they drop to the floor, and it’s a more dramatic angel. That combined with the colour really makes this page. Love the dusty glowing yellow and the dismal blue, so many shades. <3
BEAUTIFUL lighting! And it’s not just “pretty stuff”… I know exactly the kind of lighting situation you’re trying to capture. Perfect! Thomas Kincaid would be jealous.
Hmmm, is it just me, or are they outside of the ‘perimeter fence’ that Phin had to get em beyond for the escape to work? Be coo to see kevin walk over and layin waste with his mind powers, I imagine he is quiet upset over having debris hit his ride.
And Phin is making that face because he knows how embarrassed he’s going to be to be on his knees at gunpoint instead of cockily walking up to Kevin with his prize.
But I don’t get what is going on in the sky in the last two panels. Some parts are all blue and other parts are orange. I guess it is the fire but it feels all “Teal and Orange” like a Michael Bay film.
Hmm, if I may make a prediction…. I say 1-2 more pages of build up (maybe she plans to execute schtein because he is costing her too much alive) and then smoke man to the resuce!
I popped in on your stream too, you were drawing in the chain link fence. Looking at the finished colouring I’m all 0_0 (amazing). The figures in the background with the trucks, silhouetted under the lights are a damn nice addition. I’m with Max, there is so much detail in each panel, once they are shrunk down to fit on the page it can be lost. Would it ever be an option to have a link to a larger version of the page? It’s probably a lot of hassle I know, it’s just we appreciate how much detail you put in.
I hope a certain somebody who Schtein likes manages to mount a cunning rescue ;)
God, the colors are especially amazing on this page… I often go back to the very first page and the difference is just amazing (not that the first pages weren’t great).
I think I can imagine what will happen:
Warden and her guards kill Krow and Phineas, and when is Schtein’s turn, the prisoners will somehow escape and attack the guards. Schtein will: a) use it as a distraction to slip away; b) lead the riot and defeat the warden.
This just keeps getting more and more interesting… And yet, the suspense is killing me… Killing me, I say! Kinda like being stabbed by Phineas, only worse. Maybe. No, no…I think Phineas stabbing me would be worse. I’m just…uh…gonna stick with the suspense…
Have we forgotten Abel? My thought is that the explosions may have disabled whatever power damper is on the prison. Now may be the time he makes his move.
Poor Krow, not being appreciated.
Glower Power, all the way!
nobody appreciates Krow
Maybe its just me but Phins hands still seem big,,, at least in comparance to Docs XD maybe its just a thing! Jeez louise tho, I WANT to see whats going to happen next!
You know what they say about men who have big hands and feet.
“You know what they say about people who have big feet, don’t you?”
“They have big p****es?”
“No… They’re great drivers. Nice try, thought, pervert.”
maybe he’s just a big guy! Or maybe I need to be more careful!
Man, screamin’ at ’em to get on their knees when they’re already there? Warden is PAY-USSED.
Also, I heard her car zroom up in the Warden’s intro panel. Nice.
You know, I’ve seen a part of your livestream process… In that last panel, you’ve put SO MUCH detail in the truck for example but now so much of that got lost.
I mean, I LOVE these panels! Absolutely love the atmosphere. Just seems too bad you put so much time in these little things while nobody will see them.
Aw I didn’t put that much detail on the truck. Kinda scribbled it in real quick. I wasn’t going to add that much smoke in front of it, but the other gun got lost in all the detail.
Dang, that sucks. I wonder where they will be taken, or if Jay Jay is gonna make a superhero appearance and bust them out of the evil warden’s clutches? I can’t wait ’tilnext thursday!
I did see one thing in the last panel that looks off. are Phineas’ legs to thin/short and together or something? Because it doesn’t look quite right. Otherwise, the backgrounds are grat as always, especially the 3rd panel!
armastus can’t last much longer, he’s about to slap a bitch
more like stab one and then tear apart said bitch’s body.
gross :(
I’d swear Schtein is almost pouting.
The out-of-panel scene at the top looks beautiful.
he’s always pouting
Sulking yes, but this is a full bottom-lip-stuck-out ‘S NOT FAAAIIR pout.
The page looks amazing, love what you did with the first panel and just loving the lighting and backgrounds in general! I’m also kinda diggin’ Doc with those shades on, haha.
This looks so fucking amazing. I love the top panel, by cutting the characters out of the actual panel it lends it a sense of movement I wouldn’t have expected! And also the difference in their poses even as they walk, and that gun. The slant in the final panel is also fantastic. Really makes you feel the /thud/ as they drop to the floor, and it’s a more dramatic angel. That combined with the colour really makes this page. Love the dusty glowing yellow and the dismal blue, so many shades. <3
Let’s see…
On their knees, surrounded by guards with guns…
They gonna get shot up in this shit.
I wonder if the bombs disabled the Warden’s special field that prevented Misty Black Dude from swooping in.
That’s what I was thinking. I can’t see a way for them to get outta this one besides Kevin, because I assume he wanted Schtein alive, right?
“You can force my body to kneel, BUT MY BAD ATTITUDE WILL NEVER BE TAMED!”
BEAUTIFUL lighting! And it’s not just “pretty stuff”… I know exactly the kind of lighting situation you’re trying to capture. Perfect! Thomas Kincaid would be jealous.
Hmmm, is it just me, or are they outside of the ‘perimeter fence’ that Phin had to get em beyond for the escape to work? Be coo to see kevin walk over and layin waste with his mind powers, I imagine he is quiet upset over having debris hit his ride.
ooooooooo, good thought!
And Phin is making that face because he knows how embarrassed he’s going to be to be on his knees at gunpoint instead of cockily walking up to Kevin with his prize.
Funny, “On your knees” is my pickup line too.
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Schtein, first panel. A brief bad-ass mode with his new awesome shades. Please say he can keep them! THEY LOOK SO COOL ON HIM.
The last panel is really good.
But I don’t get what is going on in the sky in the last two panels. Some parts are all blue and other parts are orange. I guess it is the fire but it feels all “Teal and Orange” like a Michael Bay film.
they’re under a fluorescent parking lot light. You can see it in the first panel in the background.
Tsk. All that ‘splosion just to get captured.
Hmm, if I may make a prediction…. I say 1-2 more pages of build up (maybe she plans to execute schtein because he is costing her too much alive) and then smoke man to the resuce!
…right? ._.
Tch! It was silly of Doc to not get lasers installed in those eyes whilst he had the chance 0_o
I popped in on your stream too, you were drawing in the chain link fence. Looking at the finished colouring I’m all 0_0 (amazing). The figures in the background with the trucks, silhouetted under the lights are a damn nice addition. I’m with Max, there is so much detail in each panel, once they are shrunk down to fit on the page it can be lost. Would it ever be an option to have a link to a larger version of the page? It’s probably a lot of hassle I know, it’s just we appreciate how much detail you put in.
I hope a certain somebody who Schtein likes manages to mount a cunning rescue ;)
eh, too much hassle. Thinking about upping the page size next chapter, though, to something like 850 wide perhaps…
But aaren’t they out in the open? Doc’s blast must have disabled the shields by now so that TK guy…heheheh just wait, Bitches. Shit is going Down!
My family had a calico cat named Edgar. Awesome stuff as always! I love the last panel, especially.
Doc’ll die as he lived, glowering in a disgusted manner.
Ahaahahahahaha!
This is the part where Jayjay comes back to save the day? Right? RIGHT?
I’d totally buy a glower-power t-shirt :P
Yes, a “Glower Power” T-shirt is sorely needed.
better go ask whoever wrote that simpsons episode I was quoting then, dohoho
God, the colors are especially amazing on this page… I often go back to the very first page and the difference is just amazing (not that the first pages weren’t great).
Schtein + Glasses = Love. Those yellow-tinted glasses…
Suddenly I really want to see Schtein dressed as the Sniper from TF2
I think I can imagine what will happen:
Warden and her guards kill Krow and Phineas, and when is Schtein’s turn, the prisoners will somehow escape and attack the guards. Schtein will: a) use it as a distraction to slip away; b) lead the riot and defeat the warden.
Is anyone else besides me expecting Osgood to show up about now?
I’m not sure who’s more unhappy, Schtein or Phineas… The two could have one hell of a glowering contest.
Aw man, his name is *Edgar* Krow? Nice! What’s his middle name?
His name is Edgar Krovack. I’m going to say his middle name is Wayne just to be a goof.
That … doesn’t look good for our guys.
This just keeps getting more and more interesting… And yet, the suspense is killing me… Killing me, I say! Kinda like being stabbed by Phineas, only worse. Maybe. No, no…I think Phineas stabbing me would be worse. I’m just…uh…gonna stick with the suspense…
Have we forgotten Abel? My thought is that the explosions may have disabled whatever power damper is on the prison. Now may be the time he makes his move.