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I’ve got this great idea for a backstory comic explaining panel six. Probably do that pretty soon as kind of quicky sketch comic. That’d be a fun thing to do for vote incentives. Especially since I sort of ran out of sketches to show off.
Yeah, you’re definitely going to have to tell us more about panel #6. <.<;
Marcus… I AM YOUR FATHER D: D:
Unrelatedly, do you think Schtein will ever get a Twitter account?
I don’t think you can have a Twitter account if you are officially dead, and locked away in a prison by a warden whose brother you (accidentally) killed.
Well, at least you can’t update it on a regular base.
yeah, it’s why I’m not updating his facebook for a while. Also, I sort of have an irrational hateboner for twitter, so I don’t think I’ll be getting one anytime soon.
Does LUCA have a Twitter account? CB
Wait, so he’s not just being sarcastic in panel six? There’s a story behind it? :O
A little bit of a story. About five-ten pages worth, I’d say. I’ll probably be working on drawing most of them tonight so I can start uploading them as vote incentives soon.
Stein…a father? Even just biologically?
BUT HOW
Also I think I am enjoying seeing him bound and kneeling FAR TOO MUCH :3
…it’s because of how pretty your art is >.> <.<
I can’t help but envision his child as hideous and depraved in all sorts of ways. Poor kid.
8O
Dude’s got offspring?!
alexds1: I WAS THINKING THE SAME THING! (not the twitter one, him being Marcus’ father)
Holy crap yes you have to post the backstory for Schtein’s child support payments.
Though I kind of imagine it can be told in two panels:
1: Drunk and hitting on girl in bar.
2: On phone, face buried in his hands.
both of those are kind of what it’s like. It’s going to take a bunch of pages to tell it, though.
But someone on the outside *does* know that he’s alive… :-)
True, but I don’t think the warden knows about that. At least I hope not.
That is what I’m thinking too. Wonder what will happen to the cat though. And if “his” general is dead too.
Yeah, that sixth panel made me pause a moment. Schtein, you have some ‘splanin’ to dooo.
Panel five, his “WHAT?!” face is just right.
This woman is nanar’s!
It seems like Schtein’s phone call to Delia would mess with those cover-up plans, but I suppose we don’t know all the details yet.
The third panel is gold.
Schtein would look good in a turtleneck… More…. evil-ploty…
And here I was just thinking of the cat!
I love how I can hear her tone of voice when she goes, “A TRIAL he says!” Oh GOSH she is AMAZING.
No really, don’t … don’t rewrite the first chapters, it’s exciting discovering someone loved Langstrom SO MUCH that she had Schtein made fake-dead so she could make him REAL dead.
… I did not see that coming, btw.
Well, I kinda HAVE to at least redraw the first chapter to be able to print it. :/
besides, I’m not happy with the overall pacing, and I’d like this to be something I’m really proud of. It’s not going to drastically change, and I’d like to think anything I change will be for the better.
It’ll be a long time before I do that, though, but when I do I’ll probably leave the old original chapter up somewhere on this site for people to look at.
A trial, he says~
Basically, she went like this: http://i51.tinypic.com/2cf7ip2.png
And it was awesome.
I wanna see the kid! Is he or she going to be in the story later? I’m so curious as to how he or she looks.
Bah, the kid. I want to see the Tweeky astronomer-who-fears-alien-abductions classmate from bygone years (cmon that’s what flashbacks are for!!). The kid/vote incentive stuff can be extras in the Book You Will Publish, yesh? : )
I adore her smirk in the fourth panel. She and her brother had the same evil grin!
Poor Schtein. But also, child support? Ohohoho. I’m so excited about this comic. :3
LOVE the warden’s face in Panel 3.
holy cow. I have a couple of charms on one of my bracelets. When i read panel six my hand flew to my mouth so fast one hit me in the tooth. It hurts.
on a seperate note, i see schtein’s taking this like a regular hard ass. He’s pretty awesome for someone who can be such a ditz.
Freddy Mercury preserve us from power-mad psychopaths with a grudge. It must be so sweet for her to have this justification to live out her wildest dreams of self-righteously taking a crap on someone’s soul.